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Title: 39 Destroying Haldir Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
NO BRING HIM BACK!!!Bad Bad writer hurting my elf like that....LOL just kidding having a melt down is all...good chapter...BTW send Caladwen this way so I can kick her butt for hurting my haldir...LOL

Author's Response: But she was confused. You gotta remember. Her mother was attacked by orcs before she was even born. She was widowed at a young age, almost died from an arrow, treated like dirt by the love of her life and almost raped by a psycho maniac. What's a girl gotta do to get a little elf action around here? LOL
Date: Aug 25 2010 03:39 pm [Report This]
Title: 38 A Voice From The Past Reviewer: Melusine Signed
Well, that was a harrowing last few chapters. I hope Haldir can reach her in time to pull her back.

Author's Response: He will try but it is going to take his entire life force to do it. He's going to need help.
Date: Aug 25 2010 06:31 am [Report This]
Title: 38 A Voice From The Past Reviewer: Celebelleth Signed
I start to find it hard to breathe AND read :)
Another great chapter!

So, more please!! Anathan le suilon!! Encore s'il te plait!!
(that's all what I can do :$)

Author's Response: I love when you speak sindarin to me ; - ) lol
Date: Aug 25 2010 04:57 am [Report This]
Title: 38 A Voice From The Past Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
Okay I will say it....MORE PLEASE!! LOL. This chapter is great...I wonder what Haldir will do to get Caladwen back? update soon mellon nin.

Author's Response: Hello my fellow Haldirian. I knew I could get you to beg. Thanks for sending Legolas over. He's been very helpful, if you know what I mean. My next story is FLOWING smoothly. Very RHYTHMIC. It sure BEATS being locked in a closet. He sends his regards. LOL. ; - )
Date: Aug 24 2010 07:24 pm [Report This]
Title: 38 A Voice From The Past Reviewer: teacalm Signed
I knew it; Caladwen just barely crawled out of danger, and plunged right into more uncertain situation. You are good, very good! I've got to get a grip on my racing heartbeat. And much thanks to you for another exciting update.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Their situation is not quite resolved yet, but we're taking an interesting turn. Don't get too excited. I hope your heart is in good working condition. There's no liability in fan fiction.
Date: Aug 24 2010 05:21 pm [Report This]
Title: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: teacalm Signed
That was a close call. It only took for Caladwen to be in grave danger to snap bullheaded Haldir out of his stupor. Man! He needs a good shaking, but no matter, Caladwen is out of danger. So much uncertainty, and I have a feeling this is not the end of this yet. Thank you, thank you.

Author's Response: No, thank you teacalm. Haldir is a bit stubborn, but the situation is switching.
Date: Aug 24 2010 05:17 pm [Report This]
Title: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: Celebelleth Signed
This was intense! I'm glad of the outcome. Yet I wonder how they will manage their future...

And thanks for the avalanche of posts yesterday! Even with the time difference here, it still feels good, particularly when one cannot sleep :)

Author's Response: You are welcome. Glad I could help. Now get some rest. Oh... I see you just posted. Yea. New chapter. Hot Legolas. *panting*
Date: Aug 24 2010 03:16 pm [Report This]
Title: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: LisaG Signed
YAY HALDIR!!! I'm impressed that he let himself open up so much to communicate with Caladwen to help save her. He's made great progress in the feelings department. :) Poor Caladwen...what a horrible time she's had! Luckily, Bandorion was stopped in time, but he still damaged her dreadfully. :( She's going to need the support of family, friends and most importantly, her Guardian!

Author's Response: Have you been peeking over my shoulder as I write? Cal is definitely going to need a good support group and they will all be there to help.
Date: Aug 24 2010 10:03 am [Report This]
Title: 35 Missing Reviewer: LisaG Signed
Rereading that last paragraph..."I will find her or die trying." Is that a foreboding of the future? Eek! Maybe Caladwen will have to save Haldir in return!

Author's Response: My lips are sealed, but I like your way of thinking.
Date: Aug 24 2010 09:18 am [Report This]
Title: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
another cliffie!! ahhh!! i swear i have died so many times this weak! great great chapter! haldir is now back in my good graces :) cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks. I just can't seem to get away from the cliff.
Date: Aug 24 2010 01:21 am [Report This]
Title: 37 The Secret Room Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
Loved it...YAY Haldir and Leggy killed bad guy...I am so happy...update soon.

Author's Response: It's like batman and robin, tights and capes and all. lol
Date: Aug 23 2010 07:58 pm [Report This]
Title: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: teacalm Signed
Let's just say the suspense is killing me. I want to find Caladwen now. Good job of building up the story, and I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. I have been following your story, and it's a quite enjoyable read. Amazing how you can come up with one suspense after another. More please!

Author's Response: Hello teacalm. It's nice to meet you. Please do not apologize. I'm glad you have decided to review. I always enjoy hearing from someone new. Thank you so much for your kind words and for following along. More is on the way. I hope to hear from you again.
Date: Aug 23 2010 11:42 am [Report This]
Title: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: Celebelleth Signed
You are tough with us, lady! How cannot be totally absorbed by the story? great writing my dear :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I like keeping you on the edge.
Date: Aug 23 2010 04:03 am [Report This]
Title: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
Damn girl...I hope they find her in time. That Bandorian needs a serious butt whoopin and I believe Haldir and Legolas are the ones to do it...God this chapter is great..Hurry up..pweese..

Author's Response: Bandorion is the first twisted character I've written about. I guess the dark side of my brain wanted a little play time. Glad you liked the chappie.
Date: Aug 22 2010 09:31 pm [Report This]
Title: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous
Cliffhanger!? Love it?! Hellllooooooo!!!! Of course we love it! That is why we keep reading it. Our eyeballs refuse to lift themselves off from the Chapters. Yes it is getting pretty tense for Caladwen. Getting pretty desperate. Many tunnels huh? Well lets hope with the maps they have and with utmost speed that they find her. I am glad Haldir is listening to her this time although he had to learn his lesson in a dire situation. Roll the chapters on dear.

Author's Response: Sometimes it takes tragedy to make someone see the truth. Haldir has been so defiant that this was the only way to get him to buck up.
Date: Aug 22 2010 08:51 pm [Report This]
Title: 36 In Dark Places Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
Arrghhh!! a cliffie! *throws self off it... wonderful chapter. im glad haldir has come to his senses. please reach there in time. if anything happens to her, the idea of losing the two most handsome elves in Arda is too painful

Author's Response: I wish you would step back from that ledge my friend... It's not worth throwing away all that we have. hehehe. See ya on the flip side. sorry it's late here and I'm rambling.
Date: Aug 22 2010 08:10 pm [Report This]
Title: 35 Missing Reviewer: LisaG Signed
Oh dear! What a nasty turn of events! Find her Haldir!!!

Author's Response: Finally got that big brain of his working.
Date: Aug 22 2010 11:41 am [Report This]
Title: 35 Missing Reviewer: Celebelleth Signed
Hope you enjoy us holding our breath, clenching fists and screaming "no!!" once arrived at the bottom of the page; dear, what a cliffhanger!
Could we have just a little extra chapter, pleeeease?

Author's Response: Since you asked so nicely, I will do it just this one time. Look for a new post tonight. I promise to have it up before I go to bed this evening. Thanks Celebelleth. You're a sweetie.
Date: Aug 22 2010 09:08 am [Report This]
Title: 35 Missing Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
aaahhhhh!! that evil man! Haldir better get his butt there! owh, that elf makes me so angry at times!

Author's Response: Which makes punishing him all the more fun. Come here boy, so I can put a whoopin' on ya!
Date: Aug 22 2010 08:52 am [Report This]
Title: 35 Missing Reviewer: SylvanDreamer Signed
Ohhh, such a cliffhanger, L8Bleumer! You really enjoy making us suffer, don't you? I can hear your feindish cackling in the background.

Author's Response: hm, hm, hm, ha, ha, ho, ho... You cannot resist my evil ways.
Date: Aug 22 2010 08:49 am [Report This]
Title: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: LisaG Signed
Wow...Bandorion scares me! If he's still bothering Caladwen when Haldir gets to Minas Tirith, there won't be much left of the Gondorian to bury!

Author's Response: Isn't it romantic? lol
Date: Aug 22 2010 12:06 am [Report This]
Title: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: LadyConfidential Signed
I hope Haldir finds her soon! I wonder what will come of it...perhaps they can cast aside their differences, or at least settle upon a happier truce than the one they hve this moment - or better, they give in to their feelings.
You know, I still don't dislike Bandorion, even he is Caladwen's stalker - I still feel sorry for him, he's been rejected and feels alone.
xoxo LC

Author's Response: I can't wait for you to read the next few chapters and read your response about the characters you've mentioned above. New twists are on the way. Thanks again LC. Love hearing from you.
Date: Aug 21 2010 08:31 pm [Report This]
Title: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: haldirsbaby Anonymous
I wonder if he is gonna consummate the love he has with Caladwen? Is he gonna arrive at Minas Tirith and find Bandorion trying to seduce Caladwen? Is he gonna finally quit being bullheaded and kick the guys butt and then make sweet love to her? Girl this chapter was good, but I have a sneaking feeling it will get better.

UPDATE soon!

hugs haldirsbaby

Author's Response: I'd tell you but then I'd have to send Haldir over to keep you quiet. I guess that's not much of a threat is it? Next chapter up tomorrow.
Date: Aug 21 2010 09:45 am [Report This]
Title: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: SylvanDreamer Signed
Ohhh, you had me worried! I thought Haldir was going to ignore Caladwen's call, and then who knows what horrible things would have happened? As it is, he had better hurry up!

Author's Response: He can't ignore her anymore. Her will is bent toward him. And yes, you're right. He must hurry.
Date: Aug 21 2010 09:43 am [Report This]
Title: 34 Undesirable Reviewer: luthien85 Signed
yay!! go haldir go! ride like the wind and kick that bad man's ass!! wooo hooo!! some day my prince will come! daa daa da da da daaaa....

Author's Response: Alright. Calm down Cinderella. Yes he is on his way but will he make it in time? That is the question.
Date: Aug 21 2010 05:33 am [Report This]
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