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Reviewer: Gandalfsflaminghat Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/10/11 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6

haha really funny

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/10 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 6

Sorry I've taken so long to read your final chapter. By all means, write a sequel. You can't leave Peter Jackson stranded in Middle Earth or Arwen left in our world.

As for similar stories of my own, you might want to check out Elven Ears and Lothlórien Autumn.

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/06/10 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

Good action scenes and now much better with proper line breaks. You might also mention Pippin's surprise that his counterpart is Mannish.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'll put that in.

Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/06/10 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 2

You're off to a fine start here, Ethee. You might add line breaks between quotes and paragraphs, however. It makes for easier reading for older folks like me who have to rely on bifocals.

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