I really love your work, it makes you think and makes you wonder, and can even make you cry.
Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've never gotten this many reviews in so little time. They mean a lot to me.
Wow. This is very powerful- it's like love with the threat of death, peacefulness with a hint of dangerousness. I wonder as well what the leaves think about being taken over by the snow?- that's a very thought-provoking question! Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just had to write something because there was a snowstorm where I live and the leaves are still red. Thanks again!
That sometimes has run through my mind: how, uh, gory leaves on the snow can look.
But I do like how you tie 'blood on snow' into the last line. And the dancing in the snow sounds so freeing. :)
Author's Response: Thanks again. Hey, once winter really gets on, I'll be posting again on the Snowball Fight.