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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: elfenears Signed
Great start, especially for your first story its very good. i like the idea of harry in middle earth and i'd like to see where you take this.
if i were to offer some advice it would be to make your writing consistant, some parts are wonderfully descriptive and other parts seem almost rushed.

i look forward to more, thanks for writing and keep up the good work. x
Date: Oct 05 2009 11:57 pm [Report This]
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