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This is wonderous! I should know this, but who is Peredhil?Author's Response: Actually, Peredhil means half-elven. I'm referring to Elladan. He's my muse ;)
Enjoyed this short poem! i too like the :
You take my weapon away, fling it into the oak.It trembles like my body in your arms.
Powerful words! I like the one-word at the end of each stanza, always starting with a P. My favorite line was the comparison between the trembling sword and body.Author's Response: Thanks. I've always had a 'soft spot' for Elladan:)
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