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Title: Sometimes Reviewer: Lisse Signed
This is wonderous! I should know this, but who is Peredhil?

Author's Response: Actually, Peredhil means half-elven. I'm referring to Elladan. He's my muse ;)
Date: 07/26/10 07:06 pm [Report This]
Title: Sometimes Reviewer: Luna Signed

Enjoyed this short poem! i too like the :

You take my weapon away, fling it into the oak.
It trembles like my body in your arms.

Nice :)



Author's Response: :) Perfect description, isn't it?
Date: 09/12/09 08:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Sometimes Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed
Powerful words! I like the one-word at the end of each stanza, always starting with a P. My favorite line was the comparison between the trembling sword and body.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've always had a 'soft spot' for Elladan:)
Date: 09/12/09 02:45 pm [Report This]
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