The longing was made very visible through all the exclamations. She just wants someone to love her, someone to be her bulwark.
Very well done. I love Eowyn and your writings.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means so much to me!
"I see him there in leather and dust"
I love the entire poem, for the reasons I love all your works.
The line in quotes is very good. Keep writing
Author's Response: Keep writing. You are not the first person to tell me that. I don't think I will ever stop :)
I love this one, Dae! The longing in her was so vivid. I could see why she would turn to Aragorn when she first saw him and finally how Faramir turned out to be the perfect one.
Author's Response: Yeah, Eowyn is so sad. She's just looking for someone to be her pillar of strength so she can lean upon someone else, not just herself.