This is a rather chilling poem, and as it's written in first person that does make it spookier. However it is very well-written and I do love this; you should be very proud of yourself and I did enjoy it very much. Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! Now I just need to hope and pray like mad to Elbereth to let my teacher like it and not send me to the counsellor over it, lol. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it - Breia
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