Do you happen to be a horseback rider? :) I like it, and I agree. (I'm a horsewoman, so yay for the horses!)
Author's Response: Yes, I am a horse-back rider! I ride English (if you care) I ride two ponies (so I'm not that tall) named Twinky and Guenter. (Once again if you care!) Thank you so much for your review! -Midnight §
Twinky says he's proud of you and thank you for mentioning the pony! (Sam says thank you, too.) The horses could definitely use more attention, but one really does have to give Tolkien credit for inventing Rohan- a country completely based upon the horse. It shapes their culture, professions, and lifestyle. Anyhow, great poem and keep it up!
Author's Response: Rohan is by far, my favorite of the countries that Tolkien invented. -Midnight
Some other LotR horses are: Arod (Legolas' horse) and Asfaloth (It was *supposed* to be Glorfindel's horse but in the movie it's Arwen's horse). Anyways, I really liked your poem! It was very pretty. Fun Fact: I have a real horse shoe from when I went on a horse back riding trip-thing. Go Horses!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing my short story, and also thank you for telling me some more of the LOTR horses names. -Midnight :)