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Reviewer: Charli800 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/08 - 07:03 am Title: Unattainable Snowflake

Definitely! Dying gets repetitive after a while, you know!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought you'd say something like that!:))

Reviewer: Charli800 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/12/08 - 03:17 pm Title: Unattainable Snowflake

That's nice :) and you didn't misspell anything, as far as I can see. The only thing that didn't seem entirely in place was 'I guess', which is rather colloquial, in contrast to the near-formality of the rest of the piece.
It's short and sweet.

You love and hate sibs, don't you? They're the most annoying things on the planet at times, but they're always there for you. I wonder what was crashing? . . . hmm

Author's Response: Well, I'm not really sure either:)) Sibs are so annoying at times, like you said. Ai! I'm glad my spelling skills have improved so you don't have to curl up and die as much:))

Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/08 - 05:29 pm Title: Unattainable Snowflake

This could be a really great metaphor for something, not sure what yet, but it could be really good! Interesting . .

Author's Response: I know what you mean. Hm . . . *Giggles*

Reviewer: Kitt Otter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/12/08 - 10:20 pm Title: Unattainable Snowflake

I remember many frustrations trying to capture just one single snowflake. (Grrr). I could come close, though, when one sticks to the window; then I'd have a solid minute just to greedily take it in.
Yes, siblings are. Right now mine are (for the time being) quietly building forts in the other room. Just wait till the war begins! *puts on helmet*

Author's Response: Well, I Norwegian, Vikings! Okay, yeah, I wrote this because I remember catching snowflakes on the sleeve of my coat when I was little. Some memories stay with you, I guess.

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