That was totally exquisite, beautiful. That would be a great marriage vow for someone considering ever lasting bonding. Even for an anniversary. I hope you don't mind if I use that when my husband and I celebrate our 50th some day. Right now we re only on our 34th so that will be about 16 years from now. Great job.
Now this story between the two is beautiful. You have done a wonderful job on this story and did it well. I hope there is more
Author's Response: Thanks luv! Yes, there is a little more to this story. When next I am on my personal computer I shall be sure to post it.