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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Midnight Signed
That was great! It really captrues the spirit of freedom. Keep writing.

Date: Jan 18 2009 07:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: superweirdgirls12 Signed
How nice! I honestly like it. I also think your summary is intense. Good poem. Much better than what i can do.
Date: Dec 16 2008 04:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Most certainly like!

It doesn't really matter if poetry rhmes to me, although if it adds to the piece it can be nice. The most important thing is the meaning which you have certainly captured. Great work.

I loved the lines ;

'The girl is whispering
Tells him to go
Tells him to fly
He does
He goes
He flies'

I'm not too sure why but it worked really well.

Keep writing!
Date: Nov 10 2008 01:27 pm [Report This]
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