Lol! Your dirty little Lindir never ceases to amaze me. I love how he talks like an adult, even though he's so tiny. It's quite the funny mental picture.
Author's Response: Thanks, P.G., for the kind review; it's very much appreciated. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story so much and that it made you laugh.
Though I like the "jockularity" in this story, it still comes out as something written by a very young person with little knowledge of sex.
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your judgement of me to be a very young person with little knowledge of sex. Please review the story next time, not the author.
Lindir is such the unwitting flirt - or does he know exactly what he is doing?
Hugs Binky xxx
Author's Response: Who knows? Hehe. Glad you enjoyed the story, Binky. Thank you.
"Well, I am the only elfling I know so if I named anyone, that would imply something illegal."
"Forget legality. We have already established that I break the customs regularly with my choice in sexual partners. Name her."
Author's Response: Aww, you are lovely. Thanks so much for the review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.