I thought that was amazing. I believe you got all the Sindarin correct too. I especially liked how Limwen fought in the battle of Helm's Deep. I hope you keep writing more about her. Also if you could, can you please give me some hints on my fanfiction? Well keep up the great work! Namarie, mellon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I am working on a sequel which some of it is up already but I keep getting author's block. grr. dont you hate it when that happens. As for helpful hints, I'd be glad to give them. Anor calatha erin râd lîn
Re: The Elvish; Go to RealElvish.net or type Hisweloke into a search engine for a Sindarin-English dictionary - That one is recommended.
( If you can't find them contact me and I'll send you the links back )
Author's Response: Sweet. Thanks.
um, i sorry to critisize because this is a great story but Melon nin is my friend, and meleth nin is my love.
Author's Response: Thanks so much i thought i was getting something wrong. I will have to find a better elvish translation site.