Poor Orlando. Nice cliffhanger! I think this is an interesting idea. I like how you have it where Orlando’s sickness is never mentioned (Unless it is; is it?) and he that is forbidden from the outside world. It makes him more tempting to talk to and get to know. I like how you portrayed Viggo and Sean, very nice. Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're liking it. Orlando is actually not ill anymore during the events of this story. But his childhood illness will be talked about a bit more in future chapters.
wait... in LOTR, doesn't Legolas/Orli have blond hair? and Aragorn/Viggo has the dark hair? otherwise good.
Author's Response: This is an RPS fic, or "Real Person Slash". It is based on the actors, not the characters that they play. Otherwise, obviously, I would have used the characters' names instead of the actors'.