Good story. As we all know, Eowyn's time would eventually come.
Just a couple of pointers: You have to use a plain capital E on names like Eowyn and Eomer. An E with an accent mark will appear as ... due to a peculiarity in the website's program. Also, use double line breaks after paragraphs and quotations. It makes for easier reading, especially for older members like me who have to use bifocals.