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Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Lisse Signed
Very well done story. Your ability to paint a hugely detailed picture with few well chosen words is so admirable.

Author's Response: Moria's a fascinating place. Full of ancient memory, hidden places to find and stuff of nightmares. Of course, Legolas is fascinating too, so they go well together. :D Thank you for reading!
Date: Feb 21 2010 08:35 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: HobbitMan Signed
Very good! The atmosphere you created really works well within the story.
I thought the character descriptions, and their dialogue too, was spot on.
Good job!

Author's Response: I always am afraid that I wonít get the dialogue and character right; it makes me very happy you think so. Thanks so much for your comments! :D
Date: May 19 2009 03:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed

Isn't this new look crazy? They don't have story of the momont anymore! *Cries* Alright, It's okay. I guess.


Oh, and great story! That is after all what a review is for. For the story. Seriously, Kitt, smack me. Right here *points to back of head* Hard.

Author's Response: *running around in circles, pauses to smack Dae on the head* I knooooow! It's insane! I almost choked on my breakfast when I saw it! It is kinda nice; I like the neatness of the reviews now. Huh, I didn't notice the story of the moment was missing. I did like that. Perhaps we should suggest they put back? But yeah, thanks for reading this thing! *anxiously* I hope I didnít hit you too hardÖ -Kitt :D
Date: Apr 03 2009 12:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Luna Signed
Ooooh, I enjoy the atmosphere of this story. I could easily imagine it in my mind. Well done.

Author's Response: Danke for reading! Ah, the atmosphere. I scared myself while writing it... Really, the way Tolkien wrote the Moria chapters was so *haunting*, isn't it? I wanted to stem off of it, buuut it comes no where near as good as Tolkien's. Again, thank you!!! :D
Date: Mar 27 2009 04:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Origo Signed
Perfect :)

Author's Response: LOL! Really? *claps hands* Thanks for reading, Origo! -Kitt
Date: Jan 10 2009 09:31 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Oh yesh! Legolas sounds macho rather than la-di-da as I have read in some other stories! However what's best about it is that he is not too macho, if you know what I mean. Aragorn speaks exactly like he does in the books - I struggle with that, so well done!

Author's Response: Well, I struggle constantly with making Legolas *not* la-di-da. Oh yeah, I love that he's somewhere inbetween air-headed and mancho. But he's so in-between things he's hard to write! I'm glad Aragorn spoke alright. Thanks so much for reading! -Kitt
Date: Dec 20 2008 11:50 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Narya Signed
Oooh...creepy stuff, very atmospheric! Well done.

Author's Response: I hoped to make it a little creepy. Thanks! Now the way Tolkien did it always gave me the creeps: tons of rock over their head in abandoned mines Gandalf knows well is overrun by demons and one wrong step and they could be lost foreverÖ and then they hear a distant doom, doomÖ Sorry ramble. *g* I appreciate your comments. -Kitt
Date: Nov 25 2008 10:38 am [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: superweirdgirls12 Signed
That was intense. I like the last line. You will do no harm. Not so long as I watch. That was good! I think you have great potential and everything in this story flowed nicely. I liked it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. I thought the Moria chapters very dark and intense; I tried to capture that somewhat here, but certainly not as well as Tolkien. Your kind words have made my day, really they have. -Kitt ; )
Date: Nov 24 2008 07:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Charli800 Signed
You have a pleasant writing style: it's appropriately formal without being stilted. I have two nitpicks though:

I couldn't make head or tail of this part "Two days – more or less, he could not say – they had wandered in Moria".

Shouldn't the last line be three sentences rather than two?

While this story was a little plotless it wasn't pointless (so the plot can't matter that much, can it?) and I think you had Legolas nicely in character.

Happy writing,

Author's Response: I had more in mind to invoke a feeling that carry out a plot, and that does shame me somewhat. Still, Iím glad itís not pointless. : ) Yes, I will pick over that sentence. Thank you for taking your time to read and be constructive. I appreciate it! -Kitt
Date: Nov 20 2008 11:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: caladhiel amariel Signed
i wonder ... what if gollum HAD attacked the fellowship?
Very good story.

Author's Response: There is an endless supply of interesting (and frightening) what-ifs. Ooh, but yours is a good one - if Gollum had tried to attack them alone, he might not have gotten very far, unless he got to Frodo and the Ring first. Hmm. I am tempted tp explore that idea.... Well, thanks for reading! -Kitt : )
Date: Sep 16 2008 12:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Hidden Watcher Reviewer: Karlmir Stonewain Signed
How different Middle Earth history would have become if either Legolas or Aragorn had, without thought, sent a dagger whirring across the darkened cavern.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Oh my, that releases several plot bunnies. : ) -Kitt
Date: Jul 04 2008 11:52 am [Report This]
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