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Title: Strange Things Afoot at the Circle K Reviewer: Junior Signed
What a gentleman Orlando is...hahah, leaving the lady completely exposed. I bet he knew his friends were coming back. Kinky man. Hahah.
Loved it,espcially the last line, i envy Naomi being able to walk up to them after such a little show and have so much dignity!!

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Date: 02/10/08 06:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Pool Side Chatter and Pick-up Lines Reviewer: Junior Signed
Shocking mr bloom absolutely shocking. Haha, i hope the girl doesnt say know.
This made me chuckle. Very funny images of Orlando tripping over his own feet and Naomi running into a tree. Haha.

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Date: 02/09/08 08:21 pm [Report This]
Title: One-of-a-Kind Girl Reviewer: Junior Signed
very nice. Love it. And she's getting more balls by the minute. (and lots of money too.)
I look forward to an update.

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Date: 02/09/08 12:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Cigarettes and Taxi Cabs Reviewer: Kim Signed
I would never have believed it was your first story, it's very good for a first attempt! x
Date: 02/07/08 04:35 am [Report This]
Title: Cigarettes and Taxi Cabs Reviewer: Junior Signed
Well i certainly am intruiged! Very snappy start, I do like this Naomi girl, Hurrah for OC's with balls! They're both quite angry and i cant help but think that after shaking hands they will just have sex in the back of the taxi...hahaha, offf gotta love the tension.

I really like this so far, I like your writing style, it makes for a an enjoyable read.
I will certainly be looking for updates. :)

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Date: 02/07/08 04:28 am [Report This]
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