What a gentleman Orlando is...hahah, leaving the lady completely exposed. I bet he knew his friends were coming back. Kinky man. Hahah.
Loved it,espcially the last line, i envy Naomi being able to walk up to them after such a little show and have so much dignity!!
Shocking mr bloom absolutely shocking. Haha, i hope the girl doesnt say know.
This made me chuckle. Very funny images of Orlando tripping over his own feet and Naomi running into a tree. Haha.
Well i certainly am intruiged! Very snappy start, I do like this Naomi girl, Hurrah for OC's with balls! They're both quite angry and i cant help but think that after shaking hands they will just have sex in the back of the taxi...hahaha, offf gotta love the tension.
I really like this so far, I like your writing style, it makes for a an enjoyable read.
I will certainly be looking for updates. :)