Pretty much everything i said about Estel, this is very clever. Didn't have so much trouble with the Quenya this time. Mightn't have been 'in the moment' before. Are you going to write anything else like this, i find them fascintaing, please do, perhaps one about the elves - Li
Author's Response: Yes, I will try to write more. It does take time, but I will do my best. I enjoy it though, so yes I probably will soon. And at request I will write one about the elves. Thanks again for reviewing, Lira!