It's so sad! Please update this, I want to find out what happens! Amazing story and writing so far!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much for your kind words! I'm so glad you took the time to read. Thanks again for the support.rnrnGod Bless. rnrnIsilra'
A brilliant piece of writing, the only critism I can give it is that there are a few spelling mistakes and after two thousand words of Frodo in pain new ways to show ti become hard to find and you repeat youreslf. Other than that this sounds almost as if Tolkien himself has wrote an alternate ending to the story. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, for taking the time to read! And thank you very much for the advice, i do need to work on my spelling. ^____^ Thank you again for your kind worlds.