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Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: wtyw Signed
turned into a tree flowers, enchanting in every morning and evening; think about changing life trajectory, moving fingertip mottled years; think close to fragrant garden, ordered an Elixir of Love. Run over the Red joys and sorrows, bypassing the eyebrows do not regret, received beautiful quiet tip will meet. Those in the past and your sympathy with the idea, is the most fleeting deep soulful singing, is the soul of warm aroma is pupate into a butterfly dance. If your smile into a breeze, printed on the eyebrows, life will be able to warm. Even horizon right close, as long as well, is sunny. In Chihiro years, I met you, is this life worth consolation harvest. In the corner of the season, smile watch, as you stand in a tree form. After the Fruitful in thin and plump change, "Wide pine does not regret," "is merciless but affectionate." Miss at your fingertips condensed into an undefeated flower. Occasionally inventory that a page on your memory, will be the season that he was originally a Red spectators, wanted to do not pleased not to have compassion, after all, arrived, but the fireworks disturbed, refused to become both good and bad easily winking and color of infatuation lake people. Choose a Moonlit Night, sweet heart, shallow dream. Capture a ray of sunshine at your fingertips dance, that a warm breath of fun, a gorgeous twinkling of an eye wrinkle mood. Once, the other side of time, a tree that tree flowers bright, brilliant blooming, maybe all the good that is to wait for a grand colorful met. Month soft water, soft water moon. A ride the storm, with a ride landscape, not busy I, only fleeting warm, rest assured fly, accompanied by heating. A peek into the rain awakened the slumbering landscape vegetation, has awakened memories of past lives. The rain beat the sound of broken jade stone, such as a Zen sound, and if the fresh air, slowly into the quiet heart of the lake. Misty rain, you elegant figure wading. During leisure, always wanted to twist a clear charge to head Dai teaser, play a cordial smile, then laugh Allure. Should the can and would like to use the Jiangnan misty rain soaked Banzhan Chrysanthemum, write a prosperous marriage, take a trip to the end of time; Should you can, please allow me to read a persistent, spring waiting for you, waiting for you to hold me. Say five hundred years before Buddha bowed down to rub shoulders in exchange, that smile is eternal; life is past and continues; beautiful mountains and water. Think through the corridor of the season, able to precipitate into a beautiful smile. In the plume of incense and roll poetry in Qing Yin shallow sing in a toast with the drink, it is enough to warm the rest of his life. I just want to cut photos of life, taken under your smile; I just want Homecoming where you write into eternity. Until one day, we are getting older, offer of each character will be wearing in the past silhouette. Past that mark, in the heart of the Margaret emanation April day Huiyin pen. Rainy night listening to wind and rain lingering; clear night looking for a glimpse of the lights dim. Every trace of air flowing into all due love fragrance issued, joy
Date: May 14 2017 09:32 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Lisse Signed
How could anyone have turned this down? Beautiful.

Author's Response: I guess women of my generation are aloof to this sort of approach. Thanks for reviewing and taking the time to retrieve this poem from the musty archives of Minas Tirith. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: Jan 28 2010 09:36 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Not foolish, only hopeful.

Author's Response: Thanks for understanding. Now, if there were only some older women here who would respond to poetry...
Date: Oct 07 2009 09:40 am [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Daewen Signed
Very beautiful!

Author's Response: Thanks! There's nothing so foolish as a young man in love.
Date: Oct 06 2009 09:23 am [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: callerofcrows Signed

Wow, that was beautiful.

And the message on the side is very sweet...I'm sorry that she didn't return your affections, that's sad :(

Author's Response: Like I told LadyWarrior, women of my generation didn't seem to appreciate the romance of poetry. During my high school and college years I wrote several poems of this genre for special ladies, only to be regarded for my efforts as some sort of eccentric, or worse a laughable nut case. Life's not easy for geeks. I hate to think what might have happened if I'd started writing LotR fan fiction back then. I'm finally glad to see that a few readers appreciate my poetry at last, even if it's 40+ years later.
Date: Jan 18 2009 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: LadyWarrior Signed
Oh My God. Now I'm not the best at figuring the deep meaning behind poems, but I saw the special message right away!

It would have won me over in an instant. The world needs more males like you!

Author's Response: Whether or not my special Elf noticed the special message is something I never knew, for she sailed off to Valinor (Florida) shortly afterwards and I never saw her again. Thanks for the compliment. It would appear that women of my generation are not as easily won over by poetry as are some of my readers. I'm still single at 60. That's life!
Date: Jan 07 2009 09:24 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed
Hello. Well I think this is quite good. I like the line about ash and oak, which is about trees, no? I wish that I could write as well as you. Well good luck with your writing!

Author's Response: There's also a hidden message that you will find if you read down the left hand column of letters.

Yes, the line about ash and oak is, indeed, about trees. Those two species make up about 2/3 of the trees on my property and are an important source of firewood.

Don't make the mistake of comparing your work to that of others. Learn to be satisfied by knowing you're bringing a smile to your readers' lips. Your stuff is already good. Your style and the way you express yourself will improve with time and practice.

Thanks for reviewing. I look forward to reading your next posting.
Date: Dec 28 2008 03:27 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Pink Siamese Signed
That's beautiful. I'm of the firm opinion that it was her loss. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks. You're sweet! I thought that this poem had, by now, been long buried and forgotten in one of Minas Tirith's dusty archive vaults. It's very gratifying to learn that someone has taken the time to look over some of my older stuff.
Date: Dec 21 2008 12:05 am [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Dyubbuk Signed
Your vocabulary confuses me a little, but I think the message is sweet.I write poetry for my girlfriend often.Check it out..

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There are a few astronomical terms in my poem, because I'm addressing my lover at the time of the summer solstice. I understand that not everyone will picture what I'm trying to convey, but the poem was initially written for one person. I'll be sure to read and review your poetry.
Date: May 15 2008 01:48 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Enigma Signed
My God, if a guy wrote a poem that beautiful for me, I'd be so won. I'm such a sucker for poetry. I think I'd cry, actually. Congratulations on the superb work,

Author's Response: Gosh! Maybe I wrote the poem for the wrong woman. :) Anyway, glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Feb 23 2008 01:15 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: owlett Signed
Thats sweet. I like to reference to the mossy knoll, it somehow makes the poem seem more real in a way

Author's Response: The mossy knoll (my Cerin Amroth) is a bit overgrown with oaks and hemlocks since those days. It still holds many pleasant memories for me, however. Your review is greatly appreciated.
Date: Jan 08 2008 07:57 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: Anwyn Signed
Awww, that is very sweet! I am sorry that Andreea did not understand what you were trying to put fourth with the poem, It was quite lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks, Anwyn. I'm glad you liked it. Maybe if Andrea and I had both had an interest in LotR at the time, I could have made references to Cerin Amroth in the artwork included with the poem. Who knows what my special Elf's reaction would have been? (Sigh) Since then, she has sailed off to her own Valinor in Florida.
Date: Jan 02 2008 05:09 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: xFanarix Signed
Oh, I do like that, very much! Now, gosh, it reminds me of something in a collection of poems which I wil have to find, the style I mean. I will have to find it and tell you.

Author's Response: Thanks again, xFanarix. I bet your poetry is good.
Date: Dec 22 2007 03:00 pm [Report This]
Title: A Solstice for Andrea Reviewer: belkar bitterleaf Signed
im not good at translating poetry but it sounds sad, is it based entirely on you and this other person or does it relate to lord of the rings?

Author's Response: Thanks for you comments, Belkar. The poem is based on my brief relationship with Andrea. It can only be linked to LotR in the romantic sense. Hence, my comparison of the mossy knoll near my house to Cerin Amroth, the hill where Arwen and Aragorn pledged their troth. Also, Andrea was Elvish in appearance.
Date: Dec 22 2007 01:51 pm [Report This]
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