You dealt with some really scary images in the first version of the wedding ceremony. I like how you redeemed them by showing a more loving ceremony at the end.
Author's Response: I would do that, and i have already the plot and title for it.rnrnHannon-le, my friend, and my NaNo story will be in the site soon, pretty soon...rnrn*Hugs*rnrnHave a great holidays season and keep smiling,rnrnSivan Shemesh
Who coughed at the end?
Whoo! Very nice, very spooky. And vampire Arwen, love it!
Author's Response: I will tell in the hot sequel i'm planning for it.rnrnVampire Arwen, was just popped, blamed NaNo for it, i was in rush to get to 7k, and yet to finish it before the rndeadline, and had it even beta-ed,,, *grin*rnrnThank you for your review, glad that you love it... *Hugs Gemini_elf*rnrn*Hugs and Kisses*rnrnHave a great day/night and keep smiling,rnrnSivan Shemesh