Just found this story and its a great start. just a few spelling mistakes but not enough to make it unenjoyable.
were you inspired by the extended lotr documentries with the bearded riders interviews??
keep up the good work, thanks for writing and sharing. merry xmas as well.
A couple of months ago, I watched a LotR documentary in which I learned that about 1/5 of the Rohirrim riders were actually women wearing false beards. Your idea to write a story about one of them is most original. Is the first scene taking place in New Zealand near one of the LotR sets?
Your story sounds promising. I just love the idea of the butch Riders in fact being played by women in prosthetic beards, and Danielle seems like an enjoyable character, skilled but not all-knowing.
I would recommend reading it over yourself rather than the final spellcheck, since spellcheck, like all mechanical servants, seeks ever to subvert the will of its master . . . (*!* OMG, Spellcheck is the Ring! I see it all now.) But seriously, I'd be happy to do a bit of Beta reading for you.
Author's Response: It is an odd but good idea, who would think those tough Rohirrim riders are woman with beards plastered on.^^ I do try to read all my stories before posting but sometimes it just slips my mind.. silly me. I have to learn to beat that into my head.rnrnAnd the bit about the Beta-ing.. I would love it! It's always good to have two people (or more) looking over a story instead of one. If it fine with you I can e-mail you the spell-checked (and looked over by me) draft and you can give me your professional opinion. rnrnThank you for the review! My first on the site.rnrnKelsey