A bit confusing, but not too much. That was too short! Update soon!!!! :D
Author's Response: Why was it confusing? I didn't find it that... much... yeah, I'll try, but I still don't know what else could be wrong with the record. I've worked out the main plot but not the details. Also, I don't have my own computer, and my brother is entitled to an hour or so, and my parents spend hours copy-editing on Microsoft. I'll plead for a laptop or something...
Intriguing beginning. *and faves*
I really liked the way you described her hair.
One thing that's annoying me a little bit is the names of original characters. They're rather awkward. (btw if you ever want help with names you should go here: http://realelvish.net/ it's amazing.) Aside from that, it was very well written!!
Author's Response: I'm absolutely crap at thinking up human OC names. I can think up some (if I say so myself - wait, I just did) pretty good Elvish names, but my human names are terrible. I guess it's because I don't want to name my Gondorian dudes names that sound Elvish, because despite their Numenorian heritage they've left their elf-loving days behind. Thanks for the review, it made my day! I'll ask my bro for name ideas, he's good at that stuff.
An interesting opening. I hope Faramir gets to the truth.
Author's Response: Wow, you're my first reviewer! Thank you! Is 'interesting' good or bad? I did about four different drafts of this chapter, and will probably do just as many for the second chapter! I also hope the truth will out, but you never know...rnrn