I love this story! It's beautifully written, and I really don't have any constructive critcism. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am sorry I didn't respond sooner - I just saw this! (pesky email!).
This was just lovely.
Sad, happy, hopeful. Like the epilogue I have been wanting to read.
Author's Response: Thank you, Nephthys! This one popped into my head nearly full blown. I am glad it pleased you!