brilliant chapter, loving the story and how its going. just laughing at the thought of jack sparrow on a horse and in a palace.
can legolas take on achilles, i think he would beat him hands down. cheers for writing keep up the good work
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Legolas and Achilles will definitely encounter each other on the battlefield. The two blonds just have to have a go at each other ;) I've already planned the scene. Thanks for the review.
Brilliant chapter! Looks like you finally got to use Hashashin! Hm...I wonder who is the main bad guy in this then...
Author's Response: Yeah, I finally got to add in something from my limited knowledge of the Arabic language. The main bad guy? It's really quite complicated, but you'll see. I might ruin the story if I say anything. Thanks for the review!rn
Ooh! Post within this weekend? That'd be awesome! Yeah yeah, I KNOW I can go to FF.net but I'm in love with this site...
Brilliant chapter. It was cool to see them interact with each other. Loved the little Jack/Balian thing at the end. And Legolas' reaction to the monkey being dead...:D
Author's Response: Balian is so confused by Jack. He can't make head or tail of him, poor guy. I'm glad you enjoyed that little bit of silliness. I have to say I loved writing it.
I love the way you've included bits of Greek myth in this. It did end up getting a bit random and squished, but I guess that's what happens when you chuck four fics together :D
Author's Response: The introduction is very random, but it gets more sequenced as everyone understands what's going on. And then the action starts.
I couldn't stop laughing about the gun experiment with Balian. I KNEW I'd like this fic :D
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought I'd introduce Balian and Legolas to semi-modern artillery early on. Maybe then Legolas can learn to use a gun. Imagine how kick-ass that would be *drools*
really good satrt to this sequel, hope you update soon, thanks for writing
Author's Response: I will definitely update, and thank you for reading. The rest of the story is on FF-net by the way, or what I have of it. Just google 'Telcontar Rulz' and you'll find my profile page ;)