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Title: A Goddess' Favour Reviewer: elfenears Signed
aww you have exams poor you so hpe this cheers you up a little.
this chapter was really good and well written though i didnt like calypso hurting legolas. go on paris make us proud!!
thanks for writing update sooon

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. Calypso, I think, likes males in general, and she also likes twisting them to her will, so that's what she's been trying to do with Legolas. No one ever said she was nice ;) Paris will have to learn to be a man, now that Hector isn't here anymore.
Date: Dec 28 2007 03:30 pm [Report This]
Title: The Flight from Troy Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Snores* Bored me to death. Jokes!
Ooh dear...the Queen thinks Balian's Priam...not good!
*Gasps* Paris! No!
LOL, yes, Aragorn IS stubborn, right Balian ^_^
BRILLIANT chapter!

Author's Response: As if Cassandra's little crush on Balian isn't bad enough :D Time for Paris up a a hero... Thanks for the reviews.
Date: Dec 26 2007 02:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Of Treachery and Honour Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Ooh! Ice-cream! :O Did Jack just do something...honourable? I guess that's what happens when the four hot OB characters gather together, they influence the other characters!
Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yep, Jack did something Balianish. Everyone is going to be decidedly worried about his sanity ;)
Date: Dec 26 2007 02:43 pm [Report This]
Title: The Flight from Troy Reviewer: elfenears Signed
really really good
the dialogue didnt bore me, i like seeing the characters interact with each other. good old jack and poor paris. can't wait to see what happens to them. legolas to the rescue as always! thanks for writing and keep up the good work. merry xmas xx

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Of course Legolas will go an rescue them, once he finds out what has happened to Paris and Cassandra. And everyone else will help. Merry Christmas to you too.
Date: Dec 24 2007 02:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Burn It Down! Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
XD EXELLENT twist in the plot mellon-nin!
Love Balian! So cool in the last words to Achilles
Whoa! Paris...The fire has definitly been awoken in his spirit! The next few chapters could prove VERY interesting!
Achilles and Bresies are very romantic, even if it was unlikely o happen in reality...although I bet Achilles did sleep around

Author's Response: I'm pretty sure Achilles did sleep around. The first scene of him in Troy had him in bed with two girls. I love Balian too XP I'll bet you didn't know that (just kidding). And Paris needs anger management classes before he causes too much trouble. I guess that's what friends are for.
Date: Dec 13 2007 01:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Games of Power Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Yummy, cookie ^_^
Yeah, never underestimate Paris! :( Shame Troy has to fall...but if that lying snake goes down I will be happy :)

Author's Response: I thought Paris in the film was painfully underdeveloped. Apart from being the cause of the war and Hector's not-very-useful younger brother, he isn't really anything. A total waste of Orlando's budding talents. So here, I'm giving my own dimension of Paris. As much as I would like, I can't change history unless I want to rewrite history from Troy till now. So Troy has to fall. Don't worry about Calchas. I'll deal with him soon. Just...not yet. Thanks for the review.
Date: Dec 08 2007 09:54 am [Report This]
Title: Many Meetings Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
By "Capture" I meant re-telling of the story ^_^

Author's Response: Oh, okay. My bad XD
Date: Dec 04 2007 08:41 am [Report This]
Title: Retribution Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Great chapter! Lots of drama and angst XD And nice re-capture of Troy without boring the audience!
Ps. sorry about the lack of email, recently I've been too busy/too annoyed to have decent conversation with anyone

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Troy isn't really captured yet. It's just that Hector's dead. That was emotionally draining to write because he was my fav character in Troy. No worries about the email. :)
Date: Dec 03 2007 12:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Some Very Good Leverage Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Balances a cookie carefully on top of the review*
Great chapter! I'm glad you didn't change history, because your fics are always so...true, and changing it would've messed stuff up. Rambling again...
lol, poor Jack. That guy never gets a break. Admittedly he doesn't deserve one...

Author's Response: Thanks for the cookie, although I meant that I was giving out virtual cookies ;) Changing history will mean that I have to write alternative history, and Valar knows I'm not good enough. What happened to Jack that made you sorry for him, apart from him not getting called Captain when Barbossa is Captain Barbossa?
Date: Nov 24 2007 08:57 am [Report This]
Title: A Game of Deception Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Yay, Balian's free! *Hisses* Evil Calchas, go and die somewhere. Preferably painfully!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry. Calchas will die, just not yet. Still needing him.
Date: Nov 19 2007 10:19 am [Report This]
Title: A Game of Deception Reviewer: ravingrevolution Signed
I hope Will gets a nickname, too! I really love the "divine" character twist.

Author's Response: Jack's already got one for him. He's 'the whelp'. I'm glad you're enjoying it
Date: Nov 16 2007 11:52 am [Report This]
Title: Divine Intervention Reviewer: ravingrevolution Signed
Awesome god impressions! I can't wait to see how the plot with Achilles develops.

Author's Response: The Achilles plot is basically what it was in the film, until the wooden horse. And then...I have a few surprises up my sleeve. Thanks for the review.
Date: Nov 09 2007 03:49 pm [Report This]
Title: Divine Intervention Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
ROFL, loved the last line, Legolas just slipping casually through the door. Well, the chapter was generally funny.
Ooh...Balian's chapter...this could be FUN!

Author's Response: The next chapter isn't exactly Balian's chapter. He just reenters the story because although he is mentioned in this chapter, he doens't really appear. Will didn't think having to act was that funny ;) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Nov 09 2007 01:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Sacrilege Reviewer: ravingrevolution Signed
I'm so anxious to find out what happens! I want to kill Calchas! And excellent shooting!

Author's Response: Calchas will get what he deserves. I believe in Karma. Thanks for the review. Legolas will get an opportunity to use his newly acquired skill.
Date: Nov 04 2007 09:46 am [Report This]
Title: Sacrilege Reviewer: elfenears Signed
really great chapter, faithful to the troy movies spirit while adding even better bits in.
“Too bad there’s only one Legolas,” i have to agree there should be one for each of us hehe
thanks for writing keep up the good work x

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying my version of Troy. Oh yeah, one Legolas each, and while I'm at it, I think I might add 1 X Balian to my order form XD.
Date: Nov 03 2007 05:22 pm [Report This]
Title: Sacrilege Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Awesome chapter!! I love Jack's humour in this, "You know, I support him, mind and soul, just not in body,”
The battle scene was really cool.
And I LOVE the last scene! Balian so totally rocks! He's so brave!
and the Legolas and apple thing was SWEET!
An outstanding chapter mellon nín, you should be very proud of yourself!

Author's Response: Balian is brave, but he's definitely not being smart LOL. Jack's the funny guy. Someone has to provide comic relief ;) Thanks very much for the review.
Date: Nov 03 2007 02:17 pm [Report This]
Title: The Gun Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Yep, I enjoyed it. Too tired to work out hints ^_^ It's five minutes to midnight and I've been reading since about four...XD
*Snickers* Balian and a gun. What an image
Ooh! Balian's gonna kill his brother? Well, I half guessed, I didn't actually KNOW for definite...
Uh oh...Balian had better watch his back! (Although I KNOW you can't kill him, you have plans...)

Author's Response: Balian's not very good with modern weapons :P Didn't think he would be. Yep, Balian kills his brother in the film. No one feels sorry for the brother, even though it's a pretty horrible death. I'm definitely not going to let Calchas kill My preciousss Balian. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Oct 26 2007 03:58 pm [Report This]
Title: The Gun Reviewer: ravingrevolution Signed
Can't wait for more!
Date: Oct 26 2007 09:58 am [Report This]
Title: The Gun Reviewer: elfenears Signed
really good chapter even without the fun tone, brilliant writing keep it up more legolas though hint. cheers for this story

Author's Response: Thanks. There will be more of our fav elf. I promise. He gets to do some interesting stuff.
Date: Oct 26 2007 05:55 am [Report This]
Title: From Bad to Worse Reviewer: Atheniel Signed
I love it! Plz write more?! (and fast)

Author's Response: Definitely will write more, and I'll try to make it fast ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Oct 19 2007 10:49 am [Report This]
Title: From Bad to Worse Reviewer: ravingrevolution Signed
Oh, Jack! I love the plot development in this chapter! The characters are really coming into their own. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. The characters make their own decisions about what to do after a while. I can't really control them.
Date: Oct 19 2007 09:35 am [Report This]
Title: From Bad to Worse Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
ROFLMAO! Oh Gods! Jack, what HAVE you done now? *Can't stop laughing*
And then there's "Nurse Legolas" or "Nurse Legless" :D
The training scene was really interesting to read!

Author's Response: Jack? He's just taken the meaning of 'stupidity' to a new level. I'm glad you liked the training scene. I have no idea how to use a sword, even though my friend is one of the nation's top swordswomen.
Date: Oct 19 2007 09:08 am [Report This]
Title: From Bad to Worse Reviewer: elfenears Signed
so good, nice of them all to try and teach paris even if he is still bad.
yey you put jacks eunuch line in, love it. dont let menelaus hurt jack too much will you? thanks for writing loving the story and all the littles details you put in. keep it up

Author's Response: I won't let Menelaus hurt our fav pirate captain ;) Jack's smarter than that, and then there's loyal William. Paris will have to do his own fighting. Just had to put the eunuch line in :D Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: Oct 19 2007 07:22 am [Report This]
Title: Losses and Loot Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
lol, maybe you were feeling violent to whoever invented exams... :D
Brilliant fight scene, Legolas and Achillies were SO cool! Although the others were cool though. 'Cept Jack and the other two *Tuts and shakes head* Some things never change...

Author's Response: Sort of wrote this way before exams so I wasn't feeling so violent then. Maybe it was because I've seen the movie far too many times. I can even remember the soundtrack at that moment. Jack is not going to change much at all, although there will be some differences in the end. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Oct 12 2007 09:16 am [Report This]
Title: Losses and Loot Reviewer: elfenears Signed
that was so good, i can never write good battle scenes but you did really well. i would have preferred legolas to beat achilles but thats just me i'm sure lol. thanks for writing keep up the good work

Author's Response: I'll try and let Legolas beat Achilles sometime, but they've got loads of stuff to deal with. Thanks for the lovely comments and for reviewing.
Date: Oct 12 2007 08:38 am [Report This]
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