I am so glad you started doing Orophin's point of view in this story. It was what was missing from My Brother's Keeper. Still plenty of angst, and for that I am very glad. I also like how your characters seem very real when you write about them. Get the second part of this done, because I really want to read it.
Author's Response: You know, I had never noticed that I didn't use Orophin's p.o.v. in My Brother's Keeper. Crazy, eh? He does add arnwhole different dimention to the story. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Though I'm slow at posting because of college, Irnwill be writing a large series of small fics about the brothers that all fit together. Thanks again!