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Reviewer: arulia34z_taeliwrenz_darkside Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/10/08 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know why but I find the end slightly amusing, maybe it's because the simplicity just makes the implicated break-up so obvious and I can just imagine the look on the guys face when he realized he screwed it all up. Not as good as some of your other stuff but it's from you so it's still good - Taeliwren

Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/06/07 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1

By the way... I know this isn't relevant, but I've put another chapter on Last of the Eldar if you want to read it.

Author's Response: Oh, I read that, but I had to go after I finished reading it. I totally forgot the next time I was on. Sorry! I'll go review it now. ~Mel

Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/06/07 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I like the repeated line here, but - personally - I don't think this is one of your greatest poems, no offence meant.

Author's Response: Yeah, I know it's not one of my best. I was just stuck in my head and would not go away. It was fun to write though! Thanks for being honest! ~Mel

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/07 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

don't worry. the endings clear. the first bit up till stanza 4 sounded like scott hitting on me. help! i haven't written poetry in like a month! great poem!

Author's Response: Thanks Meg! I was sitting outside yesterday with Andrea and we decided we would each write a poem or song and then share. She wrote the most beautiful song, complete with a melody! It was so pretty! Has scott (he doesn't deserve a capital) let off yet? I guess I'll find out soon enough. Thanks for the praise! ~Mel

Reviewer: Brassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/07 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Mel! Yay! This is rhythm is great!

Author's Response: Oooh! You're back! YAY!! I missed ya! Thanks for the praise, and I'll e-mail you as soon as I can write an e-mail long enough! ~Mel

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