Reviews For Yellow Smile
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Reviewer: regaliaria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/07 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so extremely funny. Rofl. Yes I understand that working at Wal-mart can be hell. I know some that work there and the stories they can tell. Very well written.

Author's Response: Why thankee. :) I've got friends who work at the local Wal-Mart (since there are no other jobs in the area) and they come home with some interesting stories...customers can be so rude at that store... well anywho, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/07 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

*grins* Great story! Short, but brilliant! Loved it! :D

Author's Response: Why thankee :) Yeah, it was rather short..someone on ff.net suggested I do a continuning sags of 'Sauron the Wal-Mart employee' you know, his discovery of the jewerly section...that could be fun! But anywho, thakee for the review!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/04/07 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

A very clever idea: I really like the parallel of the Red Eye and the Yellow Smiley! (Hmm, doesn't Gollum have nightmares about "the Yellow Face"?) At least Sauron gets to keep serving the cause of Evil this way.

Author's Response: Thankee! :) Hmm..he probably would. Hahaha, you're right. :) I can say proudly that I have not been inside a Wal-Mart for over a month! *smiles proudly*...though, I do like the evil side more..ah! I feel so conflicted! *giggle* Anywho, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/07 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

:D:D:D VERY funny!

Author's Response: Thankee! :) It was actually my brothers idea day when we walked into Wal-Mart. He said to me, "you know sis, this place is so evil I think Sauron created it." and I shook my head in response and replied, "No bro, even this place is too evil for Sauron or even his master." :) *giggle* Thanks for the review!

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