Hey mel! Take this comment as a compliment. i have never, ever in my entire life of knowing you, seen you write a gooky love scene so detailed like this one! Good job.
p.s. I'm at a loss of words. how about hee hee? Sorry. I find love scenes funny.
Author's Response: I guess they have become more detailed because I have been feeling more confident with my writing. To tell you a truth, I was actually scared of writing romances and I would feel embarrassed if someone read it. And if you find love scenes funny, I take it you are going to giggle after your first real kiss? Then again you never can stop giggling.......Thanks for the compliment Meggy! ~Mel