I really enjoyed that, giving personality to the Vala & Curufin was great! well written & Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, valadhiel, for your nice review, and I'm sorry I let the reply go so long. I'm supposed to receive alerts when I get reviews, but I didn't for this one. Writing characters are my favorite part of writing. At least, I think so. I tried to characterize Oromė and Curufin well. I'm glad you liked them. All of Tolkien's characters have personalities, they're just hard to see sometimes (particularly in the Silmarillion). Though I don't think Tolkien would exactly agree with my characterizations . . . ::cringes:: Rolling in his grave, no doubt. You're welcome, and thank *you*! :)rnrn~Still Anonymous
Well, Noldo proposes, Vala disposes, I guess. It seemed mighty gutsy to tell your story from the point of view of a Vala, 1st person, but you carried it off. Nice!
Author's Response: Hi, Ria! Thank you for the review. I, like most authors, love nice reviews. Hmm, gutsy . . . not sure I've been called that before . . . ever . . . but I find myself oddly flattered. :) The story is not quite done, though. Half done, in fact. I was a little intimidated at first and uncertain of how to portray Oromė realistically, so I'm glad you liked him. Thank you! Still Anonymous