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Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: linmangmu Signed
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Date: Nov 17 2017 09:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths angel: Princess Of An Enemy Reviewer: linmangmu Signed
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Date: Nov 17 2017 09:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: 20160223caihuali Anonymous
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Date: Feb 23 2016 02:10 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Wait WHAT?! They LIVE?!

Oh. Okay. Well in that case, I prefer the second ending. I liked the first but it was sad and I think she deserves happy.

So the end of the series huh?

Well its been a really great trilogy to follow. You've written it really well- there's only one thing. Before you post them, you should get someone else to just read through it. Just to point out stuff like grammar and spelling and spacing. I would offer but I'm too busy summoning the courage to submit a new chapter to my story -_-

Author's Response: yes they live!! That's because the entire three story's end up being a bedtime story for Autheil's daughter told by Autheil who changed the ending!!! As for the grammar and spelling and spacing, i'm going to look through it asap! I was hoping to write a mini story for Lameia and Autheil for those who will miss Autheil and well it will be the story of how their lives are intertwined up until Lameia's murder!! Anyway thank you so much for all your reviews :D
Date: Feb 22 2013 02:25 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
That final little bit when they died was beautiful. That's all I need to say.

Author's Response: Thank you...I have a habit of killing people off in this one don't i?!
Date: Feb 22 2013 02:20 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Oh my god! Nendir-but she didn't even get to say goodbye!

I really liked how you described her arrival. I also thought it was good you didn't make a big deal of the destruction of the ring because it didn't relate to what was going on.

Author's Response: It shows manners gets you a long way!!! Anyway thank you so much :D
Date: Feb 22 2013 02:15 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I used that line in my story! In 'To Mend A Broken Soul' Tauriel says “I'm gonna pound you till your mouth and anus reverse their functions!”

Anyway! So much has happened. Woop! Lameia is dead! Authiel is queen! But what will happen now?

Author's Response: Oh hahaha It seems thay have a lot in common?!, Thank you for the review :D
Date: Feb 22 2013 02:07 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
NICK FURY!! You got the dare you thing from the Avengers HISHE didn't you?! (Please say you did otherwise I'm going to feel like an idiot...)

Anyway! The chapter! Elrohir! You have to let him live! Lamiea! You have to kill her painfully! Elladen! You have to break his heart so that there can be a beautiful healing scene later! Nendir! Has to learn some manners! Mereer! Has to stop making random prophecies and giving bad advice!

Have I forgotten anyone?

OH YEAH!

Authiel! She has to fulfill the prophecy whilst being totally badass at the same time!

Author's Response: Ha ye i got it from Nick fury! Sorry,spoiler... Elrohir's death is going to start the prophecy!! Lameia is gonna get it hopefully! Ha Nendir does indeed need manners thanks for the review
Date: Feb 21 2013 06:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Let him live! (Hey that's a Les Mis song...) I'm guessing that they will get to Rivendell and Elrond will be like MY SON! NO! Then he'll see Authiel carrying him and be like its your fault. Then Nendir will be an idiot and say yeah you're fault blah blah then she gets angry.

Maybe.

Author's Response: Hahaha, the Nendir bit made me laugh so much :D I would say wait and see but i've finished the story!!! Thanks again
Date: Feb 21 2013 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
OHMYGOSHELROHIRISHEOKAYTHEPROPHECYHASSTARTEDISHOULDUSESPACINGIMADRAMAQUEENIMGOINGTOREADTHENEXTCHAPTER

Author's Response: Haha, thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013 05:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Elrohir is starting to warm up to Authiel eh? Well, that's something I thought I'd never see. It was pretty awesome when he just read her like a book and compliments her. It made me laugh when he ends it with 'most of the time though, you're a bitch'.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i think Elrohir is trying to accept Autheil for who she is and Autheil's trying to be nicer to people but failing slightly!!! One again thank you for reading
Date: Feb 21 2013 05:49 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
LAMEIA!! OMG is she like Lameia from Merlin? Because I would be blown away by that plot bunny,as if she was evil from the inside, like an inside agent in Rivendell! Do you watch Merlin? (By the way I know that was completely missing the point of this very well written chapter, but I freaked when I saw Lamiea)

Author's Response: Yes that was the idea...Lameia from Merlin... yes i watch merlin, i used to write fanfic for it too!!! Any way thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 21 2013 05:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Hahaha everyone's making oaths of epicness and Authiel's just like O.o I'm not that senseless

Author's Response: I guess i thought another 10th walker would be boring! Thank you for reviewing
Date: Feb 21 2013 05:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
I haven't really reviewed this story much have I? No? Well, I'm going to review every few chapters till the end.

So, I really liked this chapter because I like her freakout. It's just like what I do when I get angry! I like how Elladen is completely devoted to Authiel and their love is so cute!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it so far :D
Date: Feb 21 2013 05:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
So..Authiel's not in the Fellowship, but I imagine she'll have lots of run ins with them? But where is she off to now? Hmmmm has it got something to do with her prophecy? Lots of questions for a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I suppose you will have to wait and see :D
Date: Feb 07 2013 12:20 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
This story is so good! You've got a great plot line and it's developing really well. But Authiel's personality keeps confusing me. Is she meant to keep flicking between horrible and nice? But besides that I have nothing negative to say. I love Authiel and Elladen together!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep cheep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep keep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.
Date: Feb 06 2013 12:24 am [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: Gwilwileth Signed
hey its really quite good... but the first bit needs tweaking because i dont like the fact it says "sunlight filtered dimly through the trees, dimly lighting up the world" you could use a different word the second time and you did it again "freshened the ground, leaving a refreshing smell" here.... :D pleaseeeeee look :D

Author's Response: I noticed that but have not got round to changing it yet!! Thank you for reviewing :D
Date: Feb 05 2013 12:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths Angel: Queen of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
You're back! Yay! I've been waiting for this one for some time now. I had to reread the first two because it's been so long!

Anyways, tense chapter! What will happen between the three of them now? Update so I can find out!

Author's Response: Sorry its taken so long, i've been busy recently and have not been able to find time to start or finish stories. I will be updating as soon as i can don't worry :D
Date: Feb 02 2013 02:23 am [Report This]
Title: Earths angel: Princess Of An Enemy Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YAY!!! MORE UPDATES

Author's Response: :) i hope you like the next two storys, im glade you liked the first :)
Date: Sep 28 2012 05:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Earths angel: Princess Of An Enemy Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
YAY!!! UPDATES

Author's Response: Hehe.. do nt worry, the next two storys will be uploaded soon, this is only the start. Thank you for reveiwing, look out for the rest of this story, and thank you for my final storys title!!! I have named it Princess of thieves on your request :)
Date: Sep 28 2012 05:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Ooph. Poor, poor Elladen. He and Authiel were made for each other :( But methinks there is more no? I see a new story 'Eath's Angel: Queen of Thieves Part 2- The Return of the Queen' yes? No? Maybe? Please?

Author's Response: Thank youu... For your delight there will be two more!!! Earths angel:queen of thieves being the third, this is when the whole truth is reveiled, the next... Wait and see mellonin :D
Date: Sep 27 2012 05:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
AUTHIEL!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! this made me think of Gandalf has fallen, it was such a good death scene

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it...it always gives me a sense of evil killing off my charicters...thank you for reading
Date: Sep 27 2012 05:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: ToriLee Signed
Hello there! I absolutely love this story! It's officially added to my favorites. Wonderful song choice by the way, I love Annie Lennox. :3 Such a different concept with Elladan, Elrohir, and Glorfindel. Utterly divine. Keep it up ad I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, im glad you likeed it. The portrayalof ready made charicters is some times hars,especally whrn they arre not in the films and only in the books, i was very nervous about my portrayalof these characters so it is a releif thatthey went down well. Thank you for reeading, i hope you enjoy the rest!!!

Date: Sep 25 2012 09:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: legolasalicious Signed
Awwwww shucks! I've been following this story for awhile and it's good. Really good. I like Authiel, she's badass , but I can't help but melt at the cute little lovey scenes. Keep writing and

HAPPY TOLKIEN WEEK!!

Author's Response: Thank you, it always means a lot to me when i get reviews of any sort :), I hope you enjoy the rest as much is i enjoy witing it, happy Tolien week to you too, :)
Date: Sep 20 2012 06:18 am [Report This]
Title: Earth's Angel: Princess of Thieves Reviewer: Tricksy Signed
Was it only the pressure of Autheil's prophesied fate or was there more to the story of her departure from Rivendell... I wonder. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you, i supppose only time will tell....
Date: Sep 12 2012 07:01 pm [Report This]
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