Oh. Okay. Well in that case, I prefer the second ending. I liked the first but it was sad and I think she deserves happy.
So the end of the series huh?
Well its been a really great trilogy to follow. You've written it really well- there's only one thing. Before you post them, you should get someone else to just read through it. Just to point out stuff like grammar and spelling and spacing. I would offer but I'm too busy summoning the courage to submit a new chapter to my story -_-
Author's Response: yes they live!! That's because the entire three story's end up being a bedtime story for Autheil's daughter told by Autheil who changed the ending!!! As for the grammar and spelling and spacing, i'm going to look through it asap! I was hoping to write a mini story for Lameia and Autheil for those who will miss Autheil and well it will be the story of how their lives are intertwined up until Lameia's murder!! Anyway thank you so much for all your reviews :D
Author's Response: Thank you...I have a habit of killing people off in this one don't i?!
I really liked how you described her arrival. I also thought it was good you didn't make a big deal of the destruction of the ring because it didn't relate to what was going on.
Author's Response: It shows manners gets you a long way!!! Anyway thank you so much :D
Anyway! So much has happened. Woop! Lameia is dead! Authiel is queen! But what will happen now?
Author's Response: Oh hahaha It seems thay have a lot in common?!, Thank you for the review :D
Anyway! The chapter! Elrohir! You have to let him live! Lamiea! You have to kill her painfully! Elladen! You have to break his heart so that there can be a beautiful healing scene later! Nendir! Has to learn some manners! Mereer! Has to stop making random prophecies and giving bad advice!
Have I forgotten anyone?
Authiel! She has to fulfill the prophecy whilst being totally badass at the same time!
Author's Response: Ha ye i got it from Nick fury! Sorry,spoiler... Elrohir's death is going to start the prophecy!! Lameia is gonna get it hopefully! Ha Nendir does indeed need manners thanks for the review
Author's Response: Hahaha, the Nendir bit made me laugh so much :D I would say wait and see but i've finished the story!!! Thanks again
Author's Response: Haha, thank you for reviewing :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, i think Elrohir is trying to accept Autheil for who she is and Autheil's trying to be nicer to people but failing slightly!!! One again thank you for reading
Author's Response: Yes that was the idea...Lameia from Merlin... yes i watch merlin, i used to write fanfic for it too!!! Any way thank you for reviewing :D
Author's Response: I guess i thought another 10th walker would be boring! Thank you for reviewing
So, I really liked this chapter because I like her freakout. It's just like what I do when I get angry! I like how Elladen is completely devoted to Authiel and their love is so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! I'm glad you liked it so far :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I suppose you will have to wait and see :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep cheep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! At this moment in time Authiel is meant to keep keep changing from nice to nasty, you will find out why later!! It make her somewhat more unpredictable and this will (SPOILER)be a part of a choice to kill or save someone close to her later on.... Thank you so much for reading and reviewing I hope you enjoy the rest.
Author's Response: I noticed that but have not got round to changing it yet!! Thank you for reviewing :D
Anyways, tense chapter! What will happen between the three of them now? Update so I can find out!
Author's Response: Sorry its taken so long, i've been busy recently and have not been able to find time to start or finish stories. I will be updating as soon as i can don't worry :D
Author's Response: :) i hope you like the next two storys, im glade you liked the first :)
Author's Response: Hehe.. do nt worry, the next two storys will be uploaded soon, this is only the start. Thank you for reveiwing, look out for the rest of this story, and thank you for my final storys title!!! I have named it Princess of thieves on your request :)
Author's Response: Thank youu... For your delight there will be two more!!! Earths angel:queen of thieves being the third, this is when the whole truth is reveiled, the next... Wait and see mellonin :D
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it...it always gives me a sense of evil killing off my charicters...thank you for reading
Thank you so much, im glad you likeed it. The portrayalof ready made charicters is some times hars,especally whrn they arre not in the films and only in the books, i was very nervous about my portrayalof these characters so it is a releif thatthey went down well. Thank you for reeading, i hope you enjoy the rest!!!