I'm pretty tired tonight so I was hoping that the imagery wouldn't be *too* cringey!
Good to see you back writing. :)
Daeren is an intriguing character, I wonder about his history, as it's not usual for Elves to wander (unless they're Maglor or perhaps Daeron)
I like good OC's. Morchaint and Tathar's conversation was amusing d;-)
In contrast, Tathar and Legolas’ kisses were like flowers opening in the morning sun. *Nice* imagery. Hot and sexy. I am sure Shadow ranger will like this very much!
As if his beautiful Legolas would ever, ever sleep with that arrogant 'hero' whom Daeran believed had only performed his most famed act because he was too stupid to run away.*snort* Lol, how mean!
The ellyth moved into a discussion about various pairings of Ellyn they knew or had heard of. Daeran was incredibly thankful neither of them mentioned him and Glorfindel. Because that would have been sick.
I stumbled over your story when I was searching for something short and hot, which I could read before I off my computer for today (up to more than 10 hours a day including working time is enough for my tired eyes).
This was definitely HOT, I loved the way you wrote it, their playful banter during their love play. There was a lot of humour within this made it very easy and flowing to read. I loved the scared Elfling, I guess when he will be older he might think back to this day and blush. *giggle*
Author's Response: XD Thanks very much ^.^ It was so much fun to write, and it did seem to flow quite nicely when I wrote it! *Giggles* Yep, I feel so sorry for that poor little elfling...ahh...the young and innocent!
*wolf-whistles* Nice ... I liked it ... Brilliant! Merry Christmas by the way ... (though it's a little early) :D
Author's Response: XD It was pretty hot! Merry Christmas/Yule to you too (Right, that's it, I'm just saying "Winter Season" from now on!)
In the light of this, Sian places an order for her birthday present. [1st week Feb] with Gemini_Elf: A Vanimórë or Elgalad and any other character slashfic. d:-) . [ Okay, only joking, but I'd rather like to see you write one. ]
Author's Response: O.O Wow! I'd be honoured! Just expect it sometime in May XD Jokes! Seriously, I'd love to *Plot bunnies begin tornspawn*
I will review, as I like slash, and I'm not afraid to own up. d;-). I thought this was hot. I enjoyed it a lot, and what made me laugh - not at the way you wrote it, it just tickled me - was '' Cheeky little minx. '' I just love it. I kept smiling about it and I was writing my last chapter and almost had one of my characters say that to another one, it was just stuck in my mind. I caught myself in time, because that would be plaguerising you, [ and I realized that and laughed because I'd been grinnng at the words and mental image and was near as dammit typing it into something. ] but it just fits, it is indeed very cheeky and sexy. I think you should continue .
Author's Response: If you want to borrow "Cheeky little minx" you have my permission and blessing - I've heard it used loads of timesrnbefore and COULD NOT pass up this opputunity to use it. XD I love this fic too, I'm quite proud of myself! rnXD Yay, let all the slash lovers come out of the closet! rn
Aw... nice (although somewhat odd) birthday present. Thank you.
P.S: For the use of confused reader: I am a guy. Contemplate sexuality. Then consider the slightly less obvious option. you have your answer for why I would like this fic ;)
Author's Response: Come on Shadow, this is me! A normal birthday present? What's that? ;) *Huggles* No problems, sorry it's a bit late!