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Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 - 10:09 am Title: A Sting in the Tale

Hi! This is very funny! Well, that was an unexpected end to the story; imagine it just being a wasp! I was thinking of a fearful, large, scary creature, and then I found out it was a wasp! Lol! However I must admit that even tiny insects like spiders are scary to most people, which proves your point. Well this is good, as I have said, and I can see only one mistake -

"soothe hs bruised ego." I think you missed out out an 'i'. Otherwise, this is flawless! It's well-written and I like it that his almost least-favourite Elf helped him in the end. Well done again!

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Ooh thanks! Fixed that now. Glad you liked the story. Hehe, even a brave warrior has his weaknesses! I'm having a rediculous amount of fun with these two. :P

Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/09 - 12:41 pm Title: Taking Shots

Lol! Now this was funny! Short, but sweet, and well-written, just like your others. I see you like Gildor and Elves in general! ;-)

meerkatalex

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I'm well and truly Elf-obsessed. lol.

Reviewer: superweirdgirls12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/09 - 07:32 pm Title: Taking Shots

Hello. I find this story quite amusing! Very intriguing, if I may add. I would like to contribute to the round robin. Hope you don't mind. I would first have to brainstorm something to write about. If you have any ideas, respond to this review. I don't know if you have any preferences for this story or not. Well, good job so far!

Author's Response: Eek, I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to make it a round robin. (So *that's* what that little icon was! Oops!) But please go ahead if you're feeling inspired, there is NOT enough Orophin fic out there!

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